Sunday, April 7, 2013

EAP 145 - YANG, Fan - Week 4 3/3

The miserable week has already passed.  Lots of works pile up in one day because last Monday was holiday and last Tuesday I was sick.  Five days works but only three days time for me to finish them.  Here I really want to talk about my presentation and my essay.  Frist, presentation I had prepared long time.  I searched on the internet and find many data to support my presentation; unfortunately, when I standed on the platform, I almost forget everything which I prepared before.  I took some notes to help me, but I can't even use them because nervous.  Talking to my essay, I think I did much better than before.  Teacher said a clear thesus statement is very significant but last time I did poorly on this part; however, this time I consider my thesis statements many times, and I rewrite that many times, finally, I can make sure teacher can understand my points easily.

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  1. Your blog participation for the first 4 weeks has been GOOD. You have covered the right amount of words needed, you have a variety of topics. However, you need to focus on spelling and at times grammar mistakes. Writing on a computer you should not have the spelling mistakes that you have!

    Remember that time management is VERY important.

    Grade. 16/20

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    1. Ahhh ... and I forgot to mention that you don't have a lot of comments from me because you FORGOT to take off the confirmation thing, so each time I wanted to write something it asked me to put in a "password".

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